Saturday, March 30, 2013

Saturday Centus #153



Number of words:  107 total
Style of writing: Any
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Our fingers entwined like ribbons of light when we shook hands."

“And?”

“I felt a spark between us.”

“And?”

“The meeting was over.  The end…”

“Kind of anticlimactic.”

“Well…”

“You’re killing me here” Nancy chuckled.

“He and I happened to be leaving at the same time and got into the elevator together.”

“Oh?”

“When it stopped on the ground floor, I felt him put his hand on my back to usher me out.”

“That’s good.”

“He gave me wink and left. The end…”

“I have a feeling the dance has just begun.”

“Do you really think so” Sandy asked breathlessly.

“Trust me, it’s begun” Nancy said laughing.
 

8 comments:

  1. a nice moment, like a story within a story.

    hope you have a sweet day.

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  2. Mm I think there is chick flick in there. happy Easter

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  3. Nice little slice of life and love.

    =)

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  4. Sure sounds like its begun. Very romantic.
    Sometimes the best things begin subtly. My husband and I were friends for five years before anything else transpired. The fact that we were also co-workers complicated things a bit, but now we're going on 10 years marriage!

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  5. Just what the good love doctor ordered! Nicely done!

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  6. Terrific! The thought of new love...

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  7. Had a similar experience many years ago. It could happen! Nice job on the prompt!

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  8. I know that electricity.

    I had it happen to me once.

    With neither of my husbands!

    And oddly, with a guy that looked a lot like Santa Claus!

    You are so good at dialogue!

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