He never dreamed when he blew out the candles on his cake what would happen next.
There was a knock at the door. The police came in and said, "Mr. Jones? Mr. Tom Jones? You are under arrest".
"You are aware I'm the mayor, right? What's this about"?
As they handcuffed him and put him in the cruiser he was stunned.
They drove him straight to City Hall. He couldn't understand what was happening. As they took him out and walked in the doors, he heard "Surprise" and everyone was clapping.
From behind, his wife came and whispered in his ear "He who thinks he can never be surprised. Gotcha".
23 comments:
Brilliant!
Oh I am smiling. Very creative. I thought he was going down in a blaze of campaign fund embezzlement!!!!
Hahahah... I have one of those at home, and one of these days I'm a gonna get em.
Forgot to say "great job!!"
Clever. Sneaky. Love it!~ Ames
that is a terrible trick lol but ya, they sure got him didn't they?
heehee
Pretty tricky.
=)
I love this, great SC!! :o)
You got me worried there... Very clever! Put a smile on my face.
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC week 21
Oooo! I love surprises! Great uidea for the prompt!
Haha, nice one. Great use of the prompt. :-)
Love this! I'm smiling from ear to ear, you "got" us too I believe. Very clever. Kat
I'd really need to be arrested if my husband pulled a stunt like that!
You surprised me, too!
I didn't see that ending coming at all!
Hooray!
It was a surprise party for me, too!
Great link.
What a surprise. Very, very clever and entertaining!
xoRobyn
Excellent twist at the end! You took me completely by surprise! Great use of the prompt, Viki! Well done!
Well, you got me! What a great twist. Excellent writing.
So ROMANTIC...I love this...
Well done!
Mine is here
Have you an AWESOME week!
hugs
shakira
What a fresh take! Loved the twist!
thats cool. At first I thought he had been arrested for murder or a gangster was taken him. thats me and my criminal mind lol
Wonderful. I love how you managed to do so much with just 100 words.
Whoa! Poor Tom. ;-)
That's a clever story but I hope my Hubby never surprises me in that way!
Very Clever!
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