STOP, STOP, STOP That trickster Jenny decided to shake it up. Same info above except you can only go up to 50 words. As usual the prompt is in bold. http://jennymatlock.blogspot.com/search/label/Saturday%20Centus
"Abraham Lincoln was a lot shorter then I thought he would be", Frankie said.
"He was the tallest President ever though. Make sure you type that in our report".
"Okay, Bob".
"Just think if we lived at that time, Mr. Johnson wouldn't be our teacher he would be a slave".
"Ugh, Frankie, so would we".
"That would have been so not cool".
18 comments:
Nice little kick in the pants at the end. Great dialogue, very true to life. Well done! Kat
Very well done. Interesting way to turn it around and make a point too. Kudos!
so not cool for sure....learning about the that time from a different perspective...fabulous story!
Such a good little story! so well done :o)
Abraham Lincoln didn't think slaves were cool . I heard his dad use to beat him :(
Wow, you did a great job in 50 words, Viki! A+
I'm loving this prompt. And your take on it!
=)
Wow...absolutely NOT COOL! Thank you for writing this.
What an interesting take on the prompt! Excellent!
How brilliant - a social comment! Well done!
SO not cool!
Dialogue is perfect and the message is crystal clear.
A very clever take on the prompt! Great job, Viki!
That's a clever take on the prompt.
Viki, what a subtle, interesting take on this prompt.
I'm really enjoying the different directions we are all going with this.
What fun reads this week.
You are a clever girl.
Nicely done. I just posted my story. Hope you stop by and read it.
Malisa
This is very animated. I love the voices in this piece. Great job.
xoRobyn
Clever use of an unusual perspective with this prompt. The characters must be African Americans.
Well done!
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC-Shake-up-post Week 26
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