The prompt is in bold.
"Pardon me," said Tom T. Urkee as Sheila walked by the bench. "Can I help you?" she said.
"Do you know where I live?'
"Yes, sir" and she gathered up his things. "I'll take you there."
Mr. Urkee was 90 years old. Gossip in town was that he was not well.
They walked silently until they came to his home about a block away. "Here, you are".
"How about some tea?
"That would be nice", she said.
He was the richest man in town and she was excited to see his beautiful home.
He opened the door and she was amazed by what she saw.
20 comments:
Oh boy, I see a two or three parter in this one! Was his house full of turkeys? Nice use of the prompt! Kat
What a wonderful opening. Please write some more!
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC wk 29
Aw, Viki! No fair leaving us hanging that way. Well done. Can we expect a sequel next week?
Thanks..........cj
Now you have to write another post to finish the story. You can't just leave us in suspense!!
Did he gobble her up after the doord was shut!?!
Leaves one wondering just what was inside that home!
No fair! You leave us hanging. :)~Ames
I'll join the others in begging for a continuation!
I, too, want to hear the rest...
=)
I can imagine :) if he was indeed rich .
Sweet opener Viki.
LOL! How you tease us with your cliffhangers! Great job, Viki! I want to know more too!
Oh I love little old men. Wonder what was inside....
You left us hanging! What a tease! :)
My imagination is working overtime right now. I want more!
I just posted my story. Please come by and check it out.
Malisa
I'll be back to find out more, along with the rest of them. Smile. Nice work! xo
what did she see. I need more more lol
Tina from
Mummy Diaries
Ohhh...I want to know what she saw...very nice...Peace
Ummm.... HELLL OOOOOO!
What did she see?
Come back.
It's a good thing I like you or I would have to yell at you!
What a fun use of this silly prompt.
Happy belated Thanksgiving!
This intrigues; I want to know more, take me through that door!
:)
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