If anyone does Saturday Centus you might somewhat
remember this story started as a centus. In June of 2010, I wrote a
few chapters on Mary and then stopped. I had so much to write about
her, writing weekly for centus wasn't enough. I then wrote and wrote
until I had over 30,000 words so far. In writing it though as I got
further and further my original premise somehow got blown out of the
water, ha, ha. I stopped writing her story in March of 2011. I still
haven't quite figured out how I'm going to work this out but I thought I
would put out what I have so far. Please remember this is a really
rough draft and when I wrote it, I had no chapters. Before I decided to
put this on the blog I had to go back and figure out where I could make
them. I would suggest this is a terrible way of doing it lol. The
first chapter started on March 23rd, 2012.
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Mary decided she would pamper herself until Eli came with
supper. She lit the fire in the
fireplace. She went upstairs and turned
the water on in the bathtub and poured some of the lavender bubble bath in the
water. She pulled her hair up in a
ponytail and got in the tub. She thought
when I get done, I'll wash my hair in the sink and maybe I'll keep my hair down
tonight. Maybe I'll even curl it a
little she thought.
Her thoughts turned to Sherry. She wondered what it would have been like to
have grown up with a sister. It was
strange now when she thought back, it always seemed like something was missing
but she always pushed those thoughts away.
Maybe she would talk to Eli about it if she could work it into the
conversation. She would have to play it
by ear.
After she was done bathing, she put on her robe and
washed her hair in the bathroom sink.
She blew her hair dry. Lulu was
standing right by her feet and she took the blow dryer and put it towards
Lulu. Lulu ran away and Mary
laughed.
Mary went into the bedroom where Lulu was laying on the
bed. She went up to her and petted her
and said, "Sorry, Lulu, I just couldn't resist" and kissed her on the
top of the head and Lulu purred. Mary
looked at her watch and it would still be awhile before Eli came. She went and got out a pair of jeans, a long
sleeved white sweater, underwear, and socks putting them all on the bed. It was too early to get dressed. She then noticed the jewelry box. She took it to the bed and started taking all
of her grandma's jewelry out. She
noticed a little broach with pink roses and thought it would look lovely on the
white sweater. She put all the jewelry
back in the box and left the broach on the dresser.
She went down the steps and the fire had finally taken
the chill out of the house. She went
into the kitchen and got some dishes and set them on the table for later. Mary then looked out the kitchen window and
saw it was still drizzling.
"Lulu, looks like this rain is going to be here for
the rest of the day. I can tell fall is
here.”
She remembered she had packed away some votive candles
that her Ma had. She went to one of the
boxes in the dining room and there were four votive candles, pumpkin
flavored. Mary pulled them out and set
them on the mantel and lit them. She sat
on the couch bundled in the afghan and she could smell the air fill with the
pumpkin scent and remembered. She always
loved fall on the farm the leaves on the trees turning red and gold. Her Ma's mums getting so high and she would
bring them in and put them in vases all over the house. The fresh, crisp cool air and her Pa filling
up the hay wagon for rides and the kids all bundled in quilts laughing. Her Pa would build a bonfire and they would
roast wieners and marshmallows.
Mary looked at the time and Eli would be there soon. She got up and went upstairs got dressed and
put on her grandma's broach. She looked
at her hair and decided to just put it in a ponytail. This isn't a date she thought, we're just
going to have supper and talk.
She went downstairs and she could see Eli's truck pulling
in around back. She went to the back
door and held the door open for him.
"Hi" she said.
"Hi yourself, it's nasty out there. Are you hungry?”
"I'm starving" Mary said.
Eli put the bag with the cartons down on the kitchen
table.
"Are you baking pumpkin
pie?”
Mary laughed. "No way, Ma had some pumpkin candles
so I lit them. I’m sorry to disappoint
you.”
"Oh, that's okay.
I got enough Chinese food that will fill us up.”
"Let's fill our plates and sit in the living
room" she said.
They filled up their plates and Mary sat on the chair
with the plate on her lap. Eli sat on
the sofa with his plate on the coffee table.
"This is good" she said. "Would you like a glass of ice
water?”
"That would be great" and Mary got up and
returned with water for Eli, wine for herself.
"I hope this rain stops. I'm about ready to harvest the rest of my
crop and take it to market. I will be
forever grateful to your parents for helping me. They don't know how much it meant to me. I wish I would have told them when I had the
chance" Eli said.
"I'm sure they knew and don't forget you were
helping them too.”
"Your dad taught me everything I know about
farming. Your mom would listen to me
talk about Rachel and Andrew and cry right along with me for hours. She said she knew how it was to lose a child
but I never asked her about it.”
This was just the opening she was looking for and she
said "Did Pa ever mention it?”
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