The quieter you become the more you can hear ~ Ram Dass

Saturday, August 28, 2010

Saturday Centus #17

It's Saturday Centus with different rules again.  Go over to Jenny's to see what others have come up with


Take any other SC stories (yours or someone elses) and using ANOTHER 100 WORDS...tell us the "rest of the story".

Please copy and paste the first story so we can read both entries easily.


A 100 word story that tells the rest of any previous Saturday Centus! 

The Centus I chose to write more on was Centus 12 the prompt was written by Tom which pretty much everyone moaned and groaned about lol.
The original one:

Driving six hours is a long time on the road. Six hours spent singing car-aoke and taking in the picturesque scenery, but mostly reminiscing about the good times. But those days were long gone and my mind was in a different place now. Or was it? My pulse quickened as I passed the road sign which read "Medford 27 miles." 

"Are we there yet" my son said for the millionth time".  " Not much longer and we'll be at your grandparents".  Then I'll be free and can visit some friends while they spoil you rotten, I thought.

We barely were in the driveway and they came running to get him and said, "Julie called and she's waiting on you at Monster's.  Go, have fun ".

As I pulled into the parking lot, I could see Julie and other friends. As I started walking towards them I could hear the music and started dancing and yelled "Let's get this party started".

Week 17(the second part of the story)

We went in and I heard "Surprise". I'd been so busy working to support Timmy since the divorce, I had somehow forgotten that it was my birthday. 

Suddenly, I heard stripper music come on. A handsome man came dancing towards me.

"Is that you Tom"?

"Yeah, I would only do this for you".

He whispered in my ear "I had a crush on you in high school" and I whispered back "I had one on you too".

"Happy Birthday Sarah" he said as he took me in his arms to dance.    We forgot about the stripping that could come later. 


Deborah said...

Effortlesy done, very well written!

jeff campbell said...

Saucy...well written...Peace and blessings

Cheryl said...

Loved that you chose this one to finish. It was kinda dangling out there. Nice finish.

skinner675 said...

Oooo! A bit naughty here! Loved it! Well done!

Sue said...

Ooooh. A little on the spicy side!



Bookie said...

Perfect continuation...with a pizazz ending.

RockiBottom said...

oooh... quite the birthday.

Tgoette said... it getting warm in here?

That was great, Viki! Sounds like the moans and groans just continue! LOL!

Very nicely done!

Tina said...

lol i love how you continued the humour and made it into a seductive ending there!

thanks for stopping by mine so quickly viki :)

cj Schlottman said...

Cool, very cool - and sexy and sassy. You seamlessly segued from one centus to the next, and I salute you for such a good job!


Tina said...

I remember this one. Nice to have another piece of the story!

Tracy said...

Excellent ending

Kat said...

HAHA! Love the sass! What a great continuation of the story, and the ending was perfect. Well done! Kat

Jenny said...

Oh, this was cool! I loved this. It was just like no time had elapsed and the story just continued seamlessly.

I enjoyed this very much!