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Saturday, November 6, 2010

Saturday Centus #27

It's Saturday Centus again - in a nutshell, Jenny Matlock gives us a prompt from either herself or a guest submitter and then we have to write 100 or words less related to the prompt (the prompt doesn't count toward the 100 words)  Then link it up to her blog.  It's open until the following Saturday, so that means you have all week to participate by either reading or writing.  http://jennymatlock.blogspot.com/search/label/Saturday%20Centus  

Prompt in bold ;-)

Dear Marcy,

I hope you are doing well.  I just wanted to drop you a note and say, see you soon.

                                                                     Misty.

"So, you and Misty back together again".

"It will be great to see her", Marcy said.

"Yeah, there's an article in the newspaper you'll find interesting", as Janice began to read,  "It was the 11th Anniversary of the robbery of Greedy Bank.  After all these years, the money has never been found". 

"I wonder where it is" Marcy giggled as she heard the clanging of the door. "Just a few more days and I'm out of here".    

20 comments:

Cheryl said...

Nice nice nice! Loved where you took this one.

Koby said...

Ahh, I love suspense. And your take on this week's prompt.

Sue said...

Patience pays off!

;)

June Freaking Cleaver said...

Two women who can actually keep a secret? Unheard of!

Great job...what will they do with the money?

And Greedy Bank - aren't they ALL greedy?

Malisa said...

Hmmm. Do they need a third? I could use some money right now! :) Very nice post.

Malisa

Jackie said...

Oh is this a duo of bank robbers? Misty and Marcy? who is Janice supposed to be; the jail guard who was talking to Marcy who was in jail? sorry it was kind of hard to discern what was going on at first and everything is still so unclear lol

My name is PJ. said...

Suspenseful....you left us hanging!!!! Fresh take on the prompt.

Bookie said...

I think your gal crooks are cute even though they are into robbery!

mrs. c said...

Good post, 100 words are not very many and to make a story out of it takes talent! Yes, she did make the little dolls on Alphabe Thursday!

gautami tripathy said...

This is very very good!!

embracing weeds

Ames said...

That's what you call long term financial planning! Very good use of the prompt Viki. ~Ames

jfb57 said...

Now, I think I need to know more please! ;)

Kat said...

This made me laugh out loud. Greedy Bank - love that! Nice, fun twist on the prompt. Kat

Tracy said...

Vey clever liked this one Mine is where I hope to be in 11 years My divorce is imminent so I need to prepare to not look back

Tina said...

uw im guessing shes in prison and she has hidden the money in a secret place? cool!

Teresa said...

I love a good mystery. Makes me wish it were a lot longer.

Judie said...

Hold on,Marcy! I'm coming with you!

nimaruichi said...

Greedy Bank - lol!
(btw, I want some of the money... or the secret's out) :)

RockiBottom said...

love it! would love to read the WHOLE story

Jenny said...

Wow. I loved this! Great, great, great and unique use of this little prompt.

The Saturday this Centus went live was my husbands and my 11th wedding anniversary. This was a great anniversary gift!

Thanks for linking.