This
is an ongoing story I've decided to write and put on my blog every
Monday. Please excuse the errors, I'm only doing limited editing.
Constructive criticism welcome. I wish I had a cute button on the side
where the story could go but I don't know how to make a button. Even if
I did I wouldn't know how to link up the story LOL. So if you miss a
chapter, you'll have to look at my sidebar for it. The first chapter
was written on October 23, 2011 so that should at least be some help,
ha.
10
I was finishing up eating when a woman
started wheeling herself into my room.
“Can I help you?”
“What are
you doing in Sally’s room?”
“Sally? I don’t know who she is but this is my
room. I came yesterday. My name is Annie.”
“My name
is” and she reached into her pocket pulling out a little piece of paper and
said “Clara. My name is Clara.”
“It’s nice
to meet you. I don’t know what happened
to Sally.”
“Clara, what are you doing in here?” Kate said
coming into the room.
“I came to
see how Sally was doing.”
“I’m sorry
to say Sally is on another floor now. Let’s leave Annie alone.”
“No,
that’s okay. Clara can stay if she wants
to.”
“I’d like that” Clara smiled. Katie left the room.
“You know when they say they’ve moved someone
to another floor, its code?”
“Code? Code for what?”
“That
means the person died but they don’t want to tell us.”
“Oh.” I decided to change the subject. “How long have you been here Clara?”
“I’m not
really sure but probably a couple of years.
I don’t remember a lot of things anymore.”
“I’m having trouble with that myself lately,”
Annie said. “Do you have children
Clara?”
“Yes, I
have a son, Johnny. I fell and broke my
hip and I’ve been here ever since. My mind just wouldn’t let me walk anymore
that’s why I’m in the wheelchair. I
wanted to live with Johnny but his wife and I don’t get along very well. So, he left me here.”
“I’m sorry that happened.”
“Why
should you be sorry you didn’t have anything to do with it? Also there’s that woman.”
“Woman?”
“Yes, she
visits me quite frequently. She says
she’s my daughter and I’ve tried to tell her I don’t have one but she’s very
nice to me so I just play along. She’s
been better to me than my own son. Do
you have children?”
“Yes, I have two but I didn’t want to stay
with either one of them. I’m too
independent.”
“Well, at
least you had a choice. My son used all
my money for my living expenses. I can’t believe it. All those years my husband and I saved and it’s all gone.”
“Clara we
need help with Helen.” the night nurse,Amelia, said
coming into the room.
“Helen’s
my roommate. She’s not doing well at
all. Maybe I’ll see you tomorrow. I’m the next room down” as she hurriedly left
the room.
“What’s wrong with her roommate?”
“Clara is
about the only one that can calm Helen down now. She spends a lot of time when Helen’s awake
talking to her and holding her hand.”
“Oh, can I
ask a question about Clara?”
“Sure.”
“How many
children does she have?”
“She has
two but she doesn’t remember her daughter anymore. Her daughter comes every weekend even though
she doesn’t remember her. She lives quite a distance away. It’s very hard on her but she loves her
mom.”
“That is
sad. She doesn’t seem to care much for
her son’s wife.”
“His wife is very nice. I think she blames her for not being able to
live with them when it was more the son’s decision and Clara just can’t handle
that so she blames her instead.”
“Couldn’t
she have lived with the daughter?”
“Not
really, before Clara even got here she didn’t remember the daughter anymore.”
“I see.”
“Can I get
you anything, Annie? I’m going to go see
how Clara is doing with Helen.”
“No, I’m
fine dear. Have a good night” and Amelia
left.
I watched
some TV and started getting tired. I put
my nightgown on and the hallway lights were starting to dim. I was ready to get into bed and I could hear
someone singing. I looked out in the
hallway and I could hear it was coming from Clara’s room. I timidly walked out and crept over and
peaked into the room. I could see Clara
sitting in her wheelchair next to Helen’s bed.
She was holding Helen’s hand and singing a lullaby to Helen. I turned and walked back to my room.
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3 comments:
I can't read the print. Sry :0(
I wonder if the nursing staff is really that forthcoming with other patients' personal information. I would have chosen to have the protagonist see the daughter's visit, and show the information instead of tell it.
Oh how sad. Annie is starting to see what she is heading towards with the Alzheimers disease. Sometimes I wonder if my husband is heading down that road. He is very forgetful.Keep the story going Viki. It's an eye opener!Hugs.~Ames
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