This is an ongoing story I've decided to write and put on my blog every
Monday. Please excuse the errors, I'm only doing limited editing.
Constructive criticism welcome. I wish I had a cute button on the side
where the story could go but I don't know how to make a button. Even if
I did I wouldn't know how to link up the story LOL. So if you miss a
chapter, you'll have to look at my sidebar for it. The first chapter
was written on October 23, 2011 so that should at least be some help,
ha.
Chapter 4
“Mrs. Dunkin, my name’s Jim. I’m from maintenance. We got your son all set with a cart and your
daughter mentioned that you needed some things taken out of here. So, that’s what Paul and I are here to
do.” “Well, thank you. I’m almost done with this dresser and then
you can take it.”
They
were about done when Jerry and Josh arrived at the door. “Hello, Mom.” “Hi grandma.” “Hello, you two. Where’s Julie?” “She packed the breakables in her car and
she’s getting them.” “I hope I have
enough room for everything.” “You’ll be
fine, Mrs. Dunkin. You have one of the
bigger rooms here. Do you need some help
bringing the stuff in?” “No, Josh and I
can handle it. Thanks for asking
though.” “Okay, we’ll probably see you
around Mrs. Dunkin,” and they left. “They seem very nice, don’t you think
Jerry?” “Yeah, I guess mom. Come on Josh, let’s start getting grandma’s
things in.”
First came in my beautiful mahogany
dresser and nightstand. I remember when Hank and I bought it. We got money from our parents and it was the
first things we bought as a married couple.
Next came in the mahogany hope chest.
My parents bought it for me when I was 10 years old. Every year at Christmas, my mother would buy
me something to put in it. By the time I
got married, I had a lot of stuff. Then
the most important piece of furniture I ever owned the mahogany rocker. “Are you sure you want this rocker? It is rather old and it’s not in that great
of shape.” “Yes, I most certainly
do. Your dad bought it for me when I was
pregnant with you Jerry. I rocked you,
your sister and all of my grandchildren in that for hours on end. I could never get rid of that.” “Okay, I was
just asking” and he put it in the corner.
The last thing they brought in
was the beautiful mirror for the top of the dresser. I closed my eyes and remembered how many
times I would be standing in front of it brushing my hair and Hank would come
behind me and encircle me with his embrace.
I missed him so much even more now than when he first died.
“Mom, mom, are you okay?” “I’m fine Jerry, I was just remembering
something.” “Okay, I’ll get this mirror
on for you,” and he went about attaching it.
“Do you think you’re going to like it here grandma? I remember coming here
that one year when I was in the choir; it gave me the creeps.” “Josh,” Jerry
yelled. I chuckled.
“Jerry, leave the kid alone. Josh
hopefully now that I’m here, it won’t seem so creepy. I would hate to think you wouldn’t visit
me.” “No, I’ll visit you grandma. I
promise. In fact, since I just got my driver’s license you might see me more
than ever.You
might even get sick of seeing me so
much. That’s if dad ever lets me use the car. .” “Oh, I don’t think I’d ever get
sick of seeing my favorite grandchild.”
“You’re not fooling me. I hear
you say that to all the grand kids, grandma.”
“I guess you got me there” and he gave me a big hug. “If your dad thinks it’s all right, you can
have my car. I won’t be using it
anymore. It’s not a sports car but for a
first car I don’t think it’s too bad.”
“Are you kidding me grandma? I
would love it. What do you think
dad?” “I’ll have to talk to your mother
but I’m sure we could work something out, although there would still have to be
rules.” “I know. I’ll do whatever you and mom wants me to
do. It would be so great to not have mom
drive me to school. I could even go to
the store and do all kinds of errands.”
“Yeah, yeah, yeah, I’ll talk to mom.”
“Okay, cool dad.”
“What do you think happened to Julie?” “You know her Mom. She’ll talk to anyone. Son, go and find your aunt.” “Okay, I’ll take the cart with me in case she
needs it” and Josh walked out the door.
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3 comments:
You've captured the dynamic between the characters perfectly, Viki. I can 'hear' the exchanges between the mother and son and the grandmother and grandson as if they were standing in the same room with me.
Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family, Viki!
I like the conversational tone of this. If I read it out loud it sounds perfect!
I hope things don't start disappering from her room. That would be the pits. Sorry, getting ahead of the story. But I can't help but think about the two brief times my parents were in and out of a nursing home. We had to write their names in theirs clothes because they started delivering other peoples laundry to their rooms. Off to read installment 4.~Ames
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