The quieter you become the more you can hear ~ Ram Dass

Saturday, May 25, 2013

Saturday Centus #161

The prompt this week:   'All gave some.   Some gave all."

Number of words:  106 total (including the six words of the prompt)
Style of writing: Any
Additional Pictures: Any

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All gave some. Some gave all” she heard in her mind. 

As she looked for his name on the wall, memories came flooding back of a young couple in love who were going to be married when he returned.

Tears came to her eyes when she saw his name and she caressed it with her fingers. 

She felt her husband’s arm around her as they walked away.

“Are you okay Marie?”

“I’m fine, how about you?”

“I’m good.”

“You know I love you and you’re the one, right?”

“No doubt about it” he said smiling.

She stopped and touched his face and he kissed her palm.


Karen S. said...

Now tears are coming to my eyes. It's sad, but it's also so much a part of too many lives. A very moving piece, thank you.

Jenny said...

This is beautiful Viki.

Really moving.