The quieter you become the more you can hear ~ Ram Dass



Saturday, June 2, 2012

Saturday Centus #109






Use the picture above as inspiration for your story.
Number of words: 100
Style of writing: Any
Pictures: Any you want to share

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I decided to continue from last weeks Centus here is the first part  Centus #108


Part 2

He watched his daughter go up to her classmates.   He took a seat amongst the other parents and waited for the graduation to begin. 

He felt a tap. “Hi honey.  My flight got in early.”

“She’ll be so surprised.”

As the girl walked down the aisle, she waved excitedly to her mother. 

The mother waved back. 

“She’s wearing a pair of my heels from back in the day.  I bought her a nice white pair that fit.”

“Oops, I guess she liked yours.  Hey, weren’t those the shoes we…”

“Shh, someone might hear you” and she chuckled.   

9 comments:

Judie said...

Hahaha! VERY clever! And yes, those are the same shoes!!

Sue said...

This is fun, Viki.

=)

anitamombanita said...

Clever, Viki. Loved it!

Ames said...

Are those the shoes that look better up in the air? :0

laurie @ bargain hunting said...

I'm laughing. That was such fun. Good job. laurie

Jo said...

very very clever! and gave me quite the chuckle!

jfb57 said...

Definitely a cheeky chuckle!

Mine is very late but can be seen here if you've a mind to look!

https://jfb57.wordpress.com/2012/06/05/stand-in/

Judy SheldonWalker said...

Mom has some tiny feet! My grands would swim in my shoes! lol

Jenny said...

Viki! What a fun and original take on this prompt!

I can see the chuckle in his eyes.

I wonder how long he's been gone! ha!