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Saturday, June 9, 2012

Saturday Centus #110


The prompt this week is:  You could have had it all...
Number of words: 100 plus the 6 words of the prompt.   106 total.
Style of writing: Any
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 “You could have had it all if you would have stuck with me baby” her ex-husband said over the phone.

“There’s the rub, you wanted me stuck to you like glue only when you wanted it.”

“I’m a superstar now baby.”

“Why are you calling?”

“We’re in town for a game and I thought we could reconnect baby” in a tone of voice she remembered all too well.

“What would your new wife say?”

“Come on baby for old time sake, she won’t have to know.”

“Well BABY, been there, done that, don’t want to go back and hung up.

9 comments:

Sue said...

Good for her!

=)

Dreaming said...

You go, girl! Give that guy 'what for'!

Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my post. I really enjoy this sort of challenge!

anitamombanita said...

creep! Good for her!

Naila Moon said...

Ugh! Glad she said no!

~Naila Moon
http://writing-out-of-the-blue.blogspot.com/2012/06/having-it-alla-story-106-words-only.html

Ames said...

Good for her!~Ames

Karen S. said...

Hooray, you go girl! Great smooth way of telling him just where to go...nicely and with style! :)

Cathy said...

Well said! Reminded me of Susan E. Phillips writing, whom I really like. :)

laurie @ bargain hunting said...

So glad she was able to say no. Good job. laurie

Jenny said...

It's amazing how slime becomes apparent when you're away from it.

I've known guys like this...

...only they didn't become superstars.

Sigh.

Great writing!