The quieter you become the more you can hear ~ Ram Dass



Saturday, March 30, 2013

Saturday Centus #153



Number of words:  107 total
Style of writing: Any
Additional Pictures: Any

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Our fingers entwined like ribbons of light when we shook hands."

“And?”

“I felt a spark between us.”

“And?”

“The meeting was over.  The end…”

“Kind of anticlimactic.”

“Well…”

“You’re killing me here” Nancy chuckled.

“He and I happened to be leaving at the same time and got into the elevator together.”

“Oh?”

“When it stopped on the ground floor, I felt him put his hand on my back to usher me out.”

“That’s good.”

“He gave me wink and left. The end…”

“I have a feeling the dance has just begun.”

“Do you really think so” Sandy asked breathlessly.

“Trust me, it’s begun” Nancy said laughing.
 

8 comments:

lissa said...

a nice moment, like a story within a story.

hope you have a sweet day.

Tracy Cook said...

Mm I think there is chick flick in there. happy Easter

Sue said...

Nice little slice of life and love.

=)

Aurora Hylton said...

Sure sounds like its begun. Very romantic.
Sometimes the best things begin subtly. My husband and I were friends for five years before anything else transpired. The fact that we were also co-workers complicated things a bit, but now we're going on 10 years marriage!

Karen S. said...

Just what the good love doctor ordered! Nicely done!

Bo said...

Terrific! The thought of new love...

noexcuses said...

Had a similar experience many years ago. It could happen! Nice job on the prompt!

Jenny said...

I know that electricity.

I had it happen to me once.

With neither of my husbands!

And oddly, with a guy that looked a lot like Santa Claus!

You are so good at dialogue!